Persuasive Essay

Introduction

Catch em (optional): More jobs and opportunities for teenagers can help our future

Thesis: The part-time job for teenager changed their life for a better opportunity.

List of points: This is due to saving money, helping our parents, and learn about time management.

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Saving money will help you in your future.

For example, at this age, you can save a lot of money for your financial future.

According to https://www.elitedaily.com/money/saving-in-your-teens-good/1682033 you may be learned and think about the importance of saving money.

However, most of the teenager now is working for a part-time job to earned money and to have better future.

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As well as working at the young age we can help our parents.

For example, my sister is working for a part-time job she helps our parents for the payment of the home rent.

According to http://work.chron.com we can help our parents by giving them of what we have even ourselves will help us by the experience and skills of what we learn about that work.

However, we as a teenager in this country which is New Zealand, we can work also for a part-time job when we in the right age, and help our parents by doing and giving them of what they want and what makes them happy.

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Learning about time management will make us more responsible for everything.

For example, my sister she is working and she can manage her time in study, time for family, and time for her work.

According to http://www.time-management-success.com, it’s better to manage your time for everything because you need that for your daily lives.

Especially for those students who are in senior high, they need to manage their time especially for their studies, time management is struggling at this young age.

Rebuttal (optional) Paragraph 4:

Lack of sleep may affect your health.

For example, more of the teenager now don’t have enough sleep because of social media, studies, and working for a part-time job.

According to https://www.healthline.com/health/sleep-deprivation/effects-on-body you will know what are the effects of having enough sleep and it may affect everything especially our study, family time, and work for a part-time job.

“Tragically”, lack of sleep may affect everything especially our health and it may cause depression and that’s the reason why some of the students now choose to work than to study.

Conclusion

Re-state thesis: Part-time job for teenager changed their life for a better opportunity.

Re-state list of points: This is through saving money, helping our parents, and learn about time management.

Punchline: ” It is called job and it means to suffer and success”.